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alien home 12

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1.
got to your house in the middle of the night,
an honest confessional a mess,
poetry up and down my arms
got to the part where you let me
in and i might've used the fastforward button hope you don't mind dear
it was wet it sure was wet
looking like the business end of a cigarette i was curling like smoke
around your head your precious filtered air
breathed in anyway and
said our hellos and goodbyes with quiet
disregarded the regards you gave
i stayed awake through all your days anyway you should've known



2.
and oh you tasted just like my heartbeat in my mouth
i forgot you broken-voiced but for the feel of your shirt
just like holding a shadow and i remembered everything you said without speaking
must've been too tired to tell you
so you piggybacked me to bed,
murmured nonsense the whole way 'cause you knew
i loved to hear you speak
your very bed upstairs where you laid me down,
wrapped me in a blanket then wrapped me in you and stayed there
didn't care that i was still soaked and
dontcha know i want you to always carry me home
7/13/12

tried to write one part in the nonsense style i came up with last night and the other in the usual way i write love poems.

did everyone get that?

EDIT okay guys i wrote this in anticipation of this [link] album and y'know how i tried to write half trippy nonsense/half regular romance stuff? well the album is kind of like that only in reverse (first half emotional piano ballads/second half spacy progressive noise) and i'm beginning to think i predicted it without realizing??? idk just thought i'd share
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love428's avatar
You know when Andrea Gibson did that commercial for that poets book and she said she loved her poetry so much she would show up at her door with flowers asking her to marry her?

Roses or Daisies?